Friday, April 20, 2012

Child Abuse / Neglection

Child Abuse in America

Aprox. 3.3 million Child abuse reports and allegations were made involving over 6 million children. Some general statistics about child abuse are every 10 seconds a report of child abuse is made. More than five children every day as a result of child abuse. 80% of children that die from child abuse are under the age of 4. When children die from child abuse it is not said on their certificates that child abuse/neglect was the cause of death.

Child abuse is more than bruises and broken bones. While physical abuse might be the most visible sign, other types of abuse, such as emotional abuse or In America over 3 million reports of child abuse were reported in the year 2009. child neglect, also leave deep, long lasting scars. Some signs of child abuse are worse than others. by learning common types of abuse and what you can do, you can make a huge difference in a child’s life. The earlier abused children get help, the greater chance they have to heal from their abuse and not perpetuate the cycle. 


 Diego verdugo


3 comments:

  1. Choice of Topic: The chosen topic is good people should learn about abuse.

    Well-Written (Original) Essay: not so well written mostly fact people can hear on the tv.

    Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: no had no pictures at all.

    Formatting (Text & Pictures): formatted not to well very big words small paragraphs.

    Working Links: none

    Visually Appealing: not really

    Good Labels: no

    Recommendations for making the essay better: Needs to be way longer to short and the word to big, needs to have more info that is good.

    How did the essay change your views about the topic? Didn't really inform me at all so it didn't change my view.

    Overall Grade (A-F): d-

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  2. Choice of Topic: very good.
    Well-Written (Original) Essay: Big/ easy to read.
    Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: None
    Formatting (Text & Pictures): None
    Working Links: None
    Visually Appealing: Yes, big, Easy.
    Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): None
    Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): Labels & links need to be added.
    How did the essay change your views about the topic? It didnt.
    Overall Grade (A-F): D

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  3. Choice of Topic: interesting topic

    Well-Written (Original) Essay: Its big! but its really short.

    Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: none

    Formatting (Text & Pictures): no pics

    Working Links: no links

    Visually Appealing: i like how it looks. i just woulve been better if it was longer.

    Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): no

    Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): make it a lot longer!

    How did the essay change your views about the topic?
    Overall Grade (A-F): D

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