tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post6673958720936159402..comments2023-06-29T01:48:34.631-07:00Comments on Baby Research Projects: Child Abuse / NeglectionRobert Griffithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09198487907085970109noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-13289285431239289712012-04-23T10:52:00.872-07:002012-04-23T10:52:00.872-07:00Choice of Topic: interesting topic
Well-Written (...Choice of Topic: interesting topic<br /><br />Well-Written (Original) Essay: Its big! but its really short.<br /><br />Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: none<br /><br />Formatting (Text & Pictures): no pics<br /><br />Working Links: no links<br /><br />Visually Appealing: i like how it looks. i just woulve been better if it was longer. <br /><br />Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): no <br /><br />Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): make it a lot longer!<br /><br />How did the essay change your views about the topic? <br />Overall Grade (A-F): DPEDROhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06696818446679551065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-37630687267682017212012-04-23T10:45:46.344-07:002012-04-23T10:45:46.344-07:00Choice of Topic: very good.
Well-Written (Original...Choice of Topic: very good.<br />Well-Written (Original) Essay: Big/ easy to read.<br />Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: None<br />Formatting (Text & Pictures): None<br />Working Links: None<br />Visually Appealing: Yes, big, Easy.<br />Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): None<br />Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): Labels & links need to be added. <br />How did the essay change your views about the topic? It didnt. <br />Overall Grade (A-F): DJet1594https://www.blogger.com/profile/10874846118370907633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-7804395715923766812012-04-23T10:40:49.413-07:002012-04-23T10:40:49.413-07:00Choice of Topic: The chosen topic is good people s...Choice of Topic: The chosen topic is good people should learn about abuse.<br /><br />Well-Written (Original) Essay: not so well written mostly fact people can hear on the tv.<br /><br />Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: no had no pictures at all.<br /><br />Formatting (Text & Pictures): formatted not to well very big words small paragraphs.<br /><br />Working Links: none<br /><br />Visually Appealing: not really<br /><br />Good Labels: no<br /><br />Recommendations for making the essay better: Needs to be way longer to short and the word to big, needs to have more info that is good.<br /><br />How did the essay change your views about the topic? Didn't really inform me at all so it didn't change my view.<br /><br />Overall Grade (A-F): d-ignaciohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12150344563746086822noreply@blogger.com