Monday, April 23, 2012

Education essay by Pedro Cruz

         Education is one of the most important things in a babys early life. It is very important to build the neurological foundation of the baby so he/she learns better growing up. There are many ways to help it grow intelectualy.
    
         The brain starts learning at about the 5th month in the mothers belly. The baby can hear sounds and reacts to them even before they are born so its good to talk to him or her from time to time. When the baby is born, the only thing they can do is learn. Even when you are not trying to teach the baby anything, it listens to what you say and slowly learns little by little. The baby has no worries like going to school or doing quizes and stuff so to them learning is a blast.

          Teaching the baby should never be forced. If the baby is uninterested, it is always better to let him/her explore on thier own rather than making them mad. It takes time to teach and learn so be patient with ur baby. Talking to your baby is very crucial and it helps your baby say and recognize words faster. You have to stay current with the things your trying to teach your baby like for example, if you try to help your baby walk but u stop helping them all of a sudden, they will take longer to walk.

           Reading is a very important part of your baby's education. It is a very good idea to tech them at around the 6th month of age. There have been arguments whether or not reading to them actually works but if you think about it, the more they see and hear words, the more they will get used to them and record them into thier brains. Be sure to not feed your baby too much because it could cause them to get sick.

            In conclusion, something as simple as just talking to your baby at an early age helps them become more intellectual and learn things faster.

    
    
     

4 comments:

  1. Choice of Topic: Great, i wish i thought of this.
    Well-Written (Original) Essay: Original, and fairly well written but should of been longer.
    Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: NO PICS PEDRO WTF MATE?
    Formatting (Text & Pictures): Sucky.(Mine is worse)
    Working Links: NONE.
    Visually Appealing: Yes its spaced out nicely
    Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): no.
    Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): Just make it longer.
    How did the essay change your views about the topic? It didnt.
    Overall Grade (A-F):C-

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  2. Choice of Topic: okay doesn't really grab my attention.

    Well-Written (Original) Essay: Its written alright not the best.

    Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: Its appropriate for the assignment not any pictures.

    Formatting (Text & Pictures): formatted is alright no pictures

    Working Links: none

    Visually Appealing: not really

    Good Labels: no

    Recommendations for making the essay better it needs to be longer and he should ad some pictures.

    How did the essay change your views about the topic? didn't change it at all.

    Overall Grade (A-F): c-

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  3. Choice of Topic VERRY NICE
    Well-Written (Original) Essay:yeeees
    Appropriate / Relevant Pictures:no pics main
    Formatting (Text & Pictures):isnt that the same as the last question
    Working Links:no links brah
    Visually Appealing:i mean i guess
    Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”):
    Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.):its was alright
    # How did the essay change your views about the topic? of corse
    # Overall Grade (A-F):C

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  4. Choice of Topic: Good
    Well-Written (Original) Essay: Yes Yes Yes
    Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: No pictures
    Formatting (Text & Pictures): Clean
    Working Links: None
    Visually Appealing: Bland
    Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): No labels
    Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): Need pictures
    How did the essay change your views about the topic? It didn't
    Overall Grade (A-F): B

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