tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post7169323637651909792..comments2023-06-29T01:48:34.631-07:00Comments on Baby Research Projects: Infant NutritionRobert Griffithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09198487907085970109noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-84823954288980902032012-04-23T10:38:59.604-07:002012-04-23T10:38:59.604-07:00# Choice of Topic: Great topic! Most people are st...# Choice of Topic: Great topic! Most people are stupid and assume "if it's baby food - it'll be fine for the baby."<br /><br /># Well-Written Essay: The essay is very well written. The paragraphs are easy to read (although a tad bit long), but are nicely laid out and the points are clear.<br /><br /># Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: The picture works - but I think that one or two more would help add more color and format to the overall presentation. <br /><br /># Formatting (Text & Pictures): I love how you put things into points to make it easier to read and separate the sections. 10/10 on this one.<br /><br /># Working Links: NO LINKS? F---...<br /><br /># Visually Appealing: Sections, paragraphs, pictures, and working are all appealing and relevant to the topic.<br /><br /># Good Labels: Definitely. I also like how you included food measurements, times, WHAT to feed them, etc. under the points.<br /><br /># Recommendations for making the essay better: More pictures :)and corrections to a few typos (like "fiftheen") - other than that, flawless!<br /><br /># How did the essay change your views about the topic?: It helped me better understand the required amount of food, sleep, etc. that are required for a baby... all I knew was how to feed them and to do it whenever they were fussing! :)<br /><br /># Overall Grade (A-F): ARoberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04895581937940469009noreply@blogger.com