tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post6145282852354418757..comments2023-06-29T01:48:34.631-07:00Comments on Baby Research Projects: Hemifacial Microsomia/ Goldenhar Syndrome by, Linda OlveraRobert Griffithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09198487907085970109noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-81219569918539811572011-04-29T12:33:11.548-07:002011-04-29T12:33:11.548-07:00• Choice of Topic: Pretty good.
• Well-Written (O...• Choice of Topic: Pretty good.<br /><br />• Well-Written (Original) Essay: Yupp.<br /><br />• Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: Yeah.. Really good pictures; relating to the topic.<br /><br />• Formatting (Text & Pictures): Very good.<br /><br />• Working Links: Yeahh. <br /><br />• Visually Appealing: Yeahh.. it looks niice. <br /><br />• Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): Si Si. <br /><br />• Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): None.. It was pretty pimpin. <br /><br />• How did the essay change your views about the topic? Kinda sad.. not gonna lie. <br /><br />• Overall Grade (A-F): AMiike23https://www.blogger.com/profile/01856886826143748542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-3476647232136971572011-04-29T12:31:14.442-07:002011-04-29T12:31:14.442-07:00Choice of Topic:Hemifacial Microsomia/ Goldenhar S...Choice of Topic:Hemifacial Microsomia/ Goldenhar Syndrome(very good topic since i knew nothing about this condition)<br />Well-Written (Original) Essay:Well written essay/ very informative.<br />Appropriate / Relevant Pictures:Good pictures relevent to the subject (Like the fact that She talked about personal experiences with her sister who has this condition/posted pictures of her)<br />Formatting (Text & Pictures): Well formatted. <br />Working Links:Yes they are working links that take you to related sites.<br />Visually Appealing:Yes<br />Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”):Yes.<br />Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.):I don't really have any recommendations to give since this essay was pretty solid in my opinion.<br />How did the essay change your views about the topic:It changed my views a lot since i did not know anything about this condition before reading this essay.<br />Overall Grade (A-F): AJavier Ortizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15803959248797272005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-92024782234475865872011-04-29T12:25:03.212-07:002011-04-29T12:25:03.212-07:00Choice of Topic: I love the fact that she could re...Choice of Topic: I love the fact that she could relate to this subject.<br /><br />Well-Written (Original) Essay: Very well written and she added her own personal experience.<br /><br />Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: I like how she was able to show her sister as an example.<br /><br />Formatting (Text & Pictures): Very good<br /><br />Working Links: They all worked and were good sources of information.<br /><br />Visually Appealing: Organized well and good use of pictures.<br /><br />Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): Yes<br /><br />Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): I don't think you needed more information, and I did not find any errors.<br /><br />How did the essay change your views about the topic? I never knew about this syndrome and it was I received a lot of information from this essay. It was very informing.<br /><br />Overall Grade (A-F): AHeather W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/14720820025700564048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-43585935606312916692011-04-29T12:24:10.809-07:002011-04-29T12:24:10.809-07:00Choice of Topic: Very interesting. I like how the ...Choice of Topic: Very interesting. I like how the essay was about her personal experience. Since her baby sister had this syndrome. <br /><br />Well-Written (Original) Essay: essay was very well written. Great information.<br /><br />Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: The pictures <br />were a little scary, but I liked how it showed what the syndrome did.<br /><br />Formatting (Text & Pictures): I like how the pictures were in the essay.<br /><br />Working Links: All the links worked correctly. Good job!<br /><br />Visually Appealing: The essay looked very neat and organized.<br />Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): Had very little labels, but all were relevant.<br /><br />Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): I thought the essay was very well written and did not need that much more information.<br /><br />How did the essay change your views about the topic? I thought the topic was very informing. I am glad that I had read it through.<br /><br />Overall Grade (A-F): AMohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12788957012323763704noreply@blogger.com