tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post5841459408910496763..comments2023-06-29T01:48:34.631-07:00Comments on Baby Research Projects: Personality of ChildrenRobert Griffithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09198487907085970109noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-26291359680209953682012-04-04T04:01:21.724-07:002012-04-04T04:01:21.724-07:00Child development is the major concern for every p...<a href="http://www.heinz.co.in/about-brand/complan-child-growth.aspx" rel="nofollow">Child development</a> is the major concern for every parents. Thanks for sharing information.Peterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05383346283308366495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-49423638035014780932011-04-29T12:31:26.462-07:002011-04-29T12:31:26.462-07:00Choice of Topic: Personality of Children
Well-Wri...Choice of Topic: Personality of Children <br />Well-Written (Original) Essay: good choice of topic<br />Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: an angry picture would have been a nice touch<br />Formatting (Text & Pictures): decent<br />Working Links: working<br />Visually Appealing: 9/10<br />Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): none<br />Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): spelling, more relevant pictures, lewss opinion and more fact<br />How did the essay change your views about this topic? provided good insight<br />Overall Grade (A-F): <br />BCopseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06324902289599446410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-1177984117357691032011-04-29T12:29:35.721-07:002011-04-29T12:29:35.721-07:00# Choice of Topic:GOOD
# Well-Written (Original) ...# Choice of Topic:GOOD<br /><br /># Well-Written (Original) Essay:there was a spelling error and some sentences need spaces but other than that it was well written<br /><br /># Appropriate / Relevant Pictures:YES <br /><br /># Formatting (Text & Pictures):GOOD<br /><br /># Working Links:YES<br /><br /># Visually Appealing:YES<br /><br /># Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”):YES<br /><br /># Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.):explain the term "helicopter mom" for people who have not heard it<br /><br /># How did the essay change your views about the topic? it was pretty informative. <br /><br /># Overall Grade (A-F): BHeather Critserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05100809887566563391noreply@blogger.com