tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post4355475197713600020..comments2023-06-29T01:48:34.631-07:00Comments on Baby Research Projects: AdoptionRobert Griffithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09198487907085970109noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-75506330046865649822012-04-23T10:47:18.510-07:002012-04-23T10:47:18.510-07:00Choice of Topic: Adoption, an interesting and rele...Choice of Topic: Adoption, an interesting and relevant topic.<br /><br />Well-Written (Original) Essay: well written and informative<br /><br />Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: yes<br /><br />Formatting (Text & Pictures): Good, easy flow to follow.<br /><br />Working Links: All 5 links work<br /><br />Visually Appealing: Paragraphs and pictures work well together, keeping form of essay.<br /><br />Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): all labels relevant to topic.<br /><br />Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): a misplaced period in paragraph 3, but other than that, good.<br /><br />How did the essay change your views about the topic?: I have been set in mind to adopt for a while, this has not changed my mind on the issue, but has made me aware that I need to learn more about it before going in to adopt.<br /><br />Overall Grade (A-F): Aashleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09948186828148973022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-33290140972074162652012-04-23T10:18:26.404-07:002012-04-23T10:18:26.404-07:00# Choice of Topic: Good, subject and life related ...# Choice of Topic: Good, subject and life related choice of topic. Being that our family fosters, and we were just doing the "Cost of living with a child" project, this definitely fits in well. 10/10<br /><br /># Well-Written Essay: 10/10. You did a great job with point out the different reasons to adopt, as well as the different processes in which it works. Some of the essay looks very clear that you got the information from a different source (not as much of "yourself" writing, but it doesn't hinder the essay in any way.<br /><br /># Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: The pictures look very professional as well as pretty. The colors match, look friendly, and draw your attention. 10/10<br /><br /># Formatting (Text & Pictures): The formatting looks exceptionally well. Because of the placement of your pictures, the text was moved in such a way that it looks much like a newspaper article - It makes it easier to read than just a plain "wall of text". 10/10<br /><br /># Working Links: Links working correctly :)<br /><br /># Visually Appealing: Paragraphs look nice, pictures placed well, colors are nice as well... Overall, IT SUCKS. Just kidding. 10/10.<br /><br /># Good Labels: I don't see any "Labels" but each paragraph focuses on a specific point or issue, and does it relatively clearly. As far as that goes... 10? <br /><br /># Recommendations for making the essay better: I would recommend using more personal information as well - such as your experiences with fostering and how much you want to adopt, to let people know that these aren't just castaway trouble-making children... but innocent babies that need a home. The essay is very professional, though. Kudos! <br /><br /># How did the essay change your views about the topic?: This didn't really change my views about the topic, because of what I already know. It did help me know the processes a little bit more, but overall - I stayed the same :)<br /><br /># Overall Grade (A-F): ARoberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04895581937940469009noreply@blogger.com