tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post3738626849976383360..comments2023-06-29T01:48:34.631-07:00Comments on Baby Research Projects: Essay: CPS InterventionRobert Griffithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09198487907085970109noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-19269481871759924492012-04-23T10:31:43.016-07:002012-04-23T10:31:43.016-07:00Choice of Topic: Good topic, Needs to be recognize...Choice of Topic: Good topic, Needs to be recognized.<br />Well-Written (Original) Essay: Well written, spacious, good amount of information. Tidy<br />Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: Yes, very appropriate. wish there was more though<br />Formatting (Text & Pictures): Different formats, Neat text form. Pictures are in the tight place. <br />Working Links: ALL the link work, Reliable websites<br />Visually Appealing: Yessss. :)<br />Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): Yes, plenty of good labels. <br />Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): Wish it was indented and spaced out more. <br />How did the essay change your views about the topic? it gave the CPS a more human feeling rather than a ruthless organization. <br />Overall Grade (A-F): AJet1594https://www.blogger.com/profile/10874846118370907633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-6791652095217235352012-04-23T10:29:02.471-07:002012-04-23T10:29:02.471-07:00Choice of Topic: Good choice of topic, because man...Choice of Topic: Good choice of topic, because many people have heard of CPS but don't know much about how it actually runs.<br />Well-Written (Original) Essay: Very original and well written essay<br />Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: Think the pictures were fine but could of been better.<br />Formatting (Text & Pictures):The format of the text and pics were in good order.<br />Working Links: Plenty of working links<br />Visually Appealing: Yes<br />Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”):<br />Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): I think the pictures could of been <br />How did the essay change your views about the topic? It didn't. I believe the CPS is very necessary and important organization, SAVE THE CHILDREN<br />Overall Grade (A-F):AZachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200874648936316159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-88681872827670781542012-04-23T10:16:13.227-07:002012-04-23T10:16:13.227-07:00- Choice of Topic: Good choice of topic, it is rel...- Choice of Topic: Good choice of topic, it is related to his life experiences in a way.<br /><br />- Well-Written (Original) Essay: This essay is very well written, decent length, I like how a person was interviewed.<br /><br />- Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: The choice of CPS's logos was smart in my opinion. I think that the pictures were both appropriate and relevant.<br /><br />- Formatting (Text & Pictures): The formatting was nice, easy to read, and the pictures helped break up the wall of text.<br /><br />- Working Links: All the links appear to be in working order and they seem appropriate and informative<br /><br />- Visually Appealing: This essay is visually appealing due to the format of the paragraphs along with the pictures that help break up the text.<br /><br />- Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): The essays seem well and are related to the subject<br /><br />- Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): I don't know if the italics are technically correct however, I don't know that I would change anything else.<br /><br />- How did the essay change your views about the topic? I think I understood this subject fairly well due to fostering, however it went into greater detail that helped me understand why some things work why they do.<br /><br />- Overall Grade (A-F): AMeganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13877049623153104828noreply@blogger.com