tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post1515527894248410935..comments2023-06-29T01:48:34.631-07:00Comments on Baby Research Projects: SIDS by Monika HanreichRobert Griffithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09198487907085970109noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-9370836663462550682011-04-29T12:44:40.827-07:002011-04-29T12:44:40.827-07:00Choice of Topic:SIDS
Well-Written (Original) Essay...Choice of Topic:SIDS<br />Well-Written (Original) Essay: Yes it was well composed/organized<br />Appropriate / Relevant Pictures:yes.<br />Formatting (Text & Pictures):would have liked more pictures, but the one that was included was very good. Formatting was good.<br />Working Links: yes<br />Visually Appealing: yes even though there was only one picture it made me want to read it.<br />Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”):yes<br />Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.):nothing that i can think of besides more pictures<br />How did the essay change your views about the topic?I had heard the term sids before, but i knew nothing about it and this essay informed me of what it was and did a good job of it. <br />Overall Grade (A-F):AJavier Ortizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15803959248797272005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-55938044302139571072011-04-29T12:43:47.384-07:002011-04-29T12:43:47.384-07:00PEER EVALUATION
Choice of Topic: Very Good.
Well...PEER EVALUATION<br /><br />Choice of Topic: Very Good.<br /><br />Well-Written (Original) Essay: It was Well written.<br /><br />Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: there was only one picture but it did go with the essay.<br /><br />Working Links: working links.<br /><br /><br />Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): good labels<br /><br />Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): no recomedations<br /><br />How did the essay change your views about the topic? i really didnt know any of this so it was very informing<br /><br />Overall Grade (A-F): A-Rebekahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00379434270209025824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-61393187075705984322011-04-29T12:39:42.557-07:002011-04-29T12:39:42.557-07:00Choice of Topic: This is a good topic because many...Choice of Topic: This is a good topic because many people probably don't know about SIDS and it is a very serious thing when you are having a baby.<br /><br />Well-Written (Original) Essay: Well written and organized.<br /><br />Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: You only had one picture but I understand that there probably wasn't to many pictures to put with your topic. <br /><br />Formatting (Text & Pictures): You had very good format and organizations of topics but more pictures could have been better.<br /><br />Working Links: Yes. <br /><br />Visually Appealing: Yes, this is why I chose to read it.<br /><br />Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): Yes.<br /><br />Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): I don't think you were missing anything.<br /><br />How did the essay change your views about the topic? I didn't have any views on this topic before because I didn't know about it. I'm glad I chose to read it though because it is an important thing to know!<br /><br />Overall Grade (A-F): AJulissa Pradohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03267287422242143003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-42463666276767224632011-04-29T12:28:42.438-07:002011-04-29T12:28:42.438-07:00Choice of Topic: Very interesting topic. It was in...Choice of Topic: Very interesting topic. It was informing and I felt that I got a good understanding of what it's about.<br /><br />Well-Written (Original) Essay: Very organized.<br /><br />Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: The picture was a good touch to the overall theme of the topic.<br /><br />Formatting (Text & Pictures): Good format but I would have liked to see more pictures.<br /><br />Working Links: They all worked.<br /><br />Visually Appealing: Yes, it made me interested enough to read it.<br /><br />Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): Yes.<br /><br />Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): I did not find any errors. Only thing is maybe add another picture.<br /><br />How did the essay change your views about the topic? Before reading this essay, I didn't know anything about SIDS. I learned a lot from it.<br /><br />Overall Grade (A-F): AHeather W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/14720820025700564048noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6682556516035409801.post-18273247387538352142011-04-29T12:27:19.632-07:002011-04-29T12:27:19.632-07:00# Choice of Topic: It is a very common and serious...# Choice of Topic: It is a very common and serious thing<br /><br /># Well-Written (Original) Essay: She wrote this essay very well and I can tell that she did not copy and paste.<br /><br /># Appropriate / Relevant Pictures: Her pictures relate to the topic because it shows a baby sleepy.<br /><br /># Formatting (Text & Pictures): I like how the picture was placed at the top of the essay.<br /><br /># Working Links: The links work and bring you to the site where she got her information.<br /><br /># Visually Appealing: This essay is very nice, it isn't messy or anything and its well written.<br /><br /># Good Labels (i.e. “baby, babies, SIDS, causes, facts, medical”): The labels are good and relate to the her topic.<br /><br /># Recommendations for making the essay better (spelling, grammar, pictures, facts, etc.): She should add in a few more pictures just to give the essay a little more content.<br /><br /># How did the essay change your views about the topic?: I didn't really know anything about this topic but now this essay has informed me about it.<br /><br /># Overall Grade (A-F): ALindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214381271228990191noreply@blogger.com